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Anita Joy Edwards's avatar

Intriguing story. One can conjecture what is going on from the dialogue. Eerie and unsettling. I loved it. Is it going to develop into a longer story? Although it is really complete in itself.

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The Three Candlesticks's avatar

This is a single-short story - but thank you so much for your review! I’m happy you feel it’s ‘complete’ as well! 💕

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Artemis's avatar

This was such an unsettling and unique story from the beginning, and the ending was chilling. I really enjoyed it!

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The Three Candlesticks's avatar

Thank you!! 🥰

I’m excited to do more like this - I like unsettling endings, it makes it more mysterious.

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ashestoashes's avatar

I love the ending! I can see it clearly, great job.

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